Great story and premise with one major glaring flaw...

...That I figured out shortly early on, and then got lazy and used the flaw to figure out the story easily. It took the interest out of it, because before that, it was very intriguing to try to piece the story together...

Ending was pretty anticlimactic however, so three stars for the flaw issue, and the ending. It is still worth potentially checking out though...

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